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Я свечку не держал и извиняюсь если обидел, да и не писал что было именно тоже самое а только что чтото похожее (я про взаимные обвинения и упреки).

Насколько я помню там тоже было много обиды, опять же почти весь срач остался на странице самиздата Седрика под комментариями к произведению.

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Люди которым однажды помог почему то часто откладывают себе в голове мнение что раз помог однажды то ты им чуть ли не по гроб жизни должен помогать, ведь один же раз помог так чтож теперь не помогаешь лицемер, ты всегда теперь должен разделять мое мнение и мои проблемы. Помнится с Саггаро Гиерри и первым фанфиком на Фоллаут было чтото похожее.

А вообще забавно что группа в телеге выродилась в настоящий литературный клуб в лучших традициях, то есть место где авторы поливают друг друга грязью, истерят, завидуют, сплачиваются против популярных и натирают друг другу ЧСВ вместо того чтобы стать лучше самим.

Вспоминается Крея:

«Если ты стремишься помочь всем страждущим в галактике, ты только ослабишь себя... и ослабишь их. Именно внутренняя борьба, когда она ведётся и побеждается сама собой, приносит самые ценные награды. Ты украла у них эту борьбу, обесценила её. Если ты заботишься о других, то избавься от жалости и самопожертвования. Признай ценность того, чтобы позволить им сражаться самим. И с их триумфом, они станут ещё сильнее —  для победы».

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Каждый раз когда Змей делает что-то крутое с точки зрения местных в мое голове звучит: Snake is dominating the race!

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Не передергивайте, каждый может восхищаться чем угодно пока не начинает на полном серьезе и самоотдаче доставать этим всех вокруг даже в моментах когда его откровенно посылают. Не путайте фанатов и тех придурков которые преследуют свою цель и комментируют для всех вокруг какой он плохой или хороший, а то вдруг остальные не знают, не порядок это, надо покричать да погромче, а то вдруг не все услышали и в особенности сама цель преследования. Такие люди называются не фанатами а сталкерами.

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Была старенькая игрушка Demigod Битвы богов где одним из героев был гигантский голем с башнями на плечах со стрелками и у него один из пассивных навыков сажал на эти башни лучников, между прочим одно из лучших его умений, так как по сути давало ДОТ у Танка во все стороны.

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Помнится когда узнал что есть люди с профессией Пушкиноведы подумал про себя: насколько же жалкие люди что всю жизнь посвящают изучению другого человека и рассказам о его величии всем вокруг, но на странице Седрика находятся люди что посвящают годы попыткам докопаться до всего подряд и рассказам какой он плохой всем желающим и не желающим. О них мнение у всех вокруг должно быть складывается еще хуже.

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Свойства занпакто Судзина - Гравитация и Очищение как Концептуальные свойства Луны в его разуме и логике. Теоретически придать свойство концептуального очищения пустоты Луне в Хуэко Мундо возможно, другое дело будет ли Луна Очищать за счет Концепции или за счет связи всех Занпакто с Королем Душ и хватит ли энергии и сил самого Судзина для изменения свойств тамошней луны.

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Такое чувство что проблема пустых решится Вечным Цукуеми Хуэко Мундо Эдишен Версия Очищение. Вечный дебаф на -1 НР в 6 секунд на всей территории Хуэко Мундо. Заодно выступит поводом принятия в нулевой отряд.

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Это рука Кремля! Они агенты врага, врага демократии!

Не удивлюсь если это новый вариант повесточки (и попытки растянуть сеттинг как в ВОВ)

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Очень хорошо, немногие решаются написать что-то по настолько необычному фэндому, да и качество фика очень хорошее.

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Реально Король Душ из Блича, разве что после всего отделил от себя не конечности, а части духа, да раздал себе же, а не доверенным людям (ака Нулевой Отряд) 

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Серьезно - рыцарь смерти - босс качалки, младший лич - лоли? Почему у меня такое ощущение что автор смотрит Теданора? Но вообще - смешно. Качалка из гачамучи это почти тюрьма - а тут тюремный дракон вритра, все сходится: Вритра - главный босс качалки.

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Просто Нирен все сокрушается как Томуру не отыскали в детстве (Томура же внук учителя Оллмайта) и вспомнил этот отрывок, вот и всунул как возможное пояснение откуда вся трагедия пошла. А дважды скинул потому что не был уверен что под первыми томами еще ктото приходит почитать стену.

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Очень хороший кусок про все для одного из фанфика английского - разговор попаданца Шигараки и Оллмайта

I  shook my head. “Okay, so I'm going to explain this in a roundabout   way. Hopefully it'll distract you and make the whole thing not hit you   as hard.”

 

As if.

 

But I suppose I could try.

 

Even  as All Might looked ready to object again, I waved him off. “Your   friend, David Shield.” His mouth snapped shut while Izuku snapped to   attention, the boy's eyes seeming to shine with interest. “He's under   the impression that your impending retirement from heroism will   destabilize society at large.” From what I knew, he was right, too.

 

All Might grimaced and sighted, shaking his head, “Oh, Dave...”

 

“To  prevent you from needing to retire,” I continued, sipping at my  drink,  “he's invented a nifty little gadget that amplifies the user's  quirk.”  Both of their eyes widened in shock. “Except, the I-island board  of  directors made the decision that this kind of technological  development  would potentially destabilize various geopolitical hotspots  if it ever  proliferated into wider use.”

 

All Might slowly nodded. “I  can see why they would. Dave really is a  genius, but he's always been a  bit of an idealist, too. For him,  technology is only ever used for the  good of humanity.”

 

I stared at the man and decided that, no, I didn't really have enough time to dig into that.

 

“So  he's decided that, for the good of the world, he needs to steal it and  smuggle it out to you. He's already in contact with a group of   professional high-end thieves that are going to assault I-island and   help him recover his own invention from where it's been locked up.”

 

All  Might's jaw dropped as he stood and began pacing. “Dammit Dave! No,   you can't... ugh. I'll have to do something about this.” Yagi turned   back to me, “thank you for bringing this to my attention, I'll-” he  took  in my grim expression and his fists clenched, “there's more to  this,  isn't there?”

 

I shrugged. “So, here's the  billion-yen question. One of the very few  people All Might considers  friends is planning to break bad and destroy  his life by masterminding  the heist of the century. I want you to think really hard about what I'm  going to ask next.” I dipped my glasses to look him in  the eye again.  “Who, in the criminal underworld, would hear about this  and realize  that forcing you to arrest your best friend and throw him in  jail would  be the absolute most amusing thing ever?”

 

Confusion and incomprehension clouded his expression for a long moment, before...

 

If  I'd thought that All Might had frozen before, I would have said my  new  question almost turned the man to a pale, haggard statue. Very   quietly, a raspy whisper left his mouth, the one word encapsulating the   desperate denial of a man wanting to reject the truth he knew to be   real.

 

“No.”

 

I leaned back against the  rusting shell of a washing machine and  sighed. Yeah, there it was. The  existential dread that I'd been hoping  to engender as some kind of  vicarious revenge for what I remembered of  Shigaraki's youth and the  revelations I'd brought with me. Actually  achieving what I'd set out to  do, though, felt hollow. I just couldn't  enjoy it.

 

“It  gets worse,” I stated, because of course it did. All for One knew   nothing if not how to twist the knife. “Because the real mastermind of   this entire plan doesn't actually care if your friend survives to  give  you his invention.” All Might grimaced, practically trembling with   rage. “In fact, maybe the thieves he hires make sure he suffers an   'accident' just so he dies in front of you.” I narrowed my gaze. “Just   so his daughter sees you unable to save him, unable to stop him from  destroying his life trying to help you.”

 

“I'm going to tear him apart-” All Might began, his skeletal arms nearly bulging with an involuntary activation of his quirk.

 

“Because  then you've got a young, socially isolated, quirkless girl  who's  father just died or was imprisoned at the hands of her greatest  hero.  The man she considers family as well. And someone offers her a way  to  take control of her life back, something to let her strike  back at the  system that punished her father for wanting to do the right  thing and  help the world's greatest hero. Because people like that,  well....  those have to be the real villains, right?”

 

Yagi looked on  the verge of throwing up, and if he'd had anything in his stomach I'm  sure he would have. Really, if the man had a stomach in the first place,  I'm sure he'd have given it the old college try.

 

“Because,”  I continued, propping my feet up on something that might have once been  part of a car, “he already did it once and it worked out pretty well  that time. Why not try it again?”

 

There was real horror in  his eyes now, as he looked at me. It  was a dark and visceral,  gut-churning thing that threatened to eat alive  a man who believed in a  good, kind, and just world. Spitting that kind  of poison out... I  wouldn't be surprised if it really did kill just a  little bit of hope  and faith in humanity.

 

“Ah... Shi-shimura-san? Who... who  did all this?” Izuku asked into the  lingering silence. He was shaken by  what he'd heard, smart enough as he  was to put together a few missing  pieces in the story, but he was  also... yeah, there was steel in him. I  knew that. I didn't know why I was surprised, but... maybe it was just  that he was so perpetually-easy to underestimate.

 

“He told  me to call him 'sensei' when we met.” I replied. “The name he  goes by  is All for One. I'll let All Might tell you all of the gritty  details  later, but suffice to say he's the guy who put a hole in your  mentor's  side.”

 

Izuku's eyes widened at the revelation, but he  nodded slowly and,  looking between All Might and myself, he asked.  “And... your grandmother  was someone important to All Might so he  kidnapped you when you were  young? So that he could use you against All  Might later?”

 

I chuckled and shook my head. “Kid, you  don't get it yet. He doesn't need to kidnap people. That's amateur-hour  stuff for him.” I waved at my footrest. “But where are my manners? Kick  back, put your feet up.”

 

Izuku blushed, “A-ah, that's okay. I mean, I'm, um...”

 

I sighed. “Put your feet up, Green Bean, I'm trying to make a point.”

 

The  teenager frowned, but after a look at the still-comatose All Might,  he  slowly stretched his legs out and rested his feet on the same piece  of  debris I was using.

 

I grinned and snapped my fingers,  pointing at our now-mutual footrest.  “Now that I think about it, those  are some sweet-looking shoes. It's  kind of weird that we have the same  taste in shoes.” I wiggled my feet  and showed off the bulky  red-and-white sneakers they were encased in,  identical to Izuku's own.  “Why do you think that is, Izuku-kun?”

 

The greenette  frowned as he looked at our footwear, realizing what I'd  pointed out  was true. “I, um... I don't know? It is weird, though,  because-I just  mean, I wear these because they're comfortable because-”  His eyes  widened. “The extra toe-joint! You're quirkless too!”

 

He  slapped a hand over his mouth as he realized the unconscionable  taboo  he'd committed. To be fair, in any other circumstance, being  'outed' as  quirkless publicly would have been the kind of thing someone  would get  truly angry over, so I couldn't blame him.

 

I casually  reached over and picked up a broken children's toy and held  it up  before making final contact with my pinkie finger and allowing it  to  disintegrate into dust.

 

Izuku's eyes widened again, this  time in a mix of confusion and some  nebulous hurt for being 'tricked'  into a wrong conclusion. I returned  his expression with a cold, cruel  smirk.

 

“Five-point disintegration quirk,” I stated. “See,  it's weird because I was a late-bloomer. Quirk didn't emerge until I was  seven or so and, well...” I picked up another piece of junk. “It just  so happened to be a quirk that was both completely anomalous and would  seriously injure, or even kill anyone who came in contact with me. Like  my family.”

 

Izuku inhaled a shocked breath and I saw Yagi close his eyes, a stricken expression on his face as he listened.

 

“Because  that's what All for One does,” I explained. “Coincidences, random  accidents, and tragedies that all just happen to further his designs.  With a quirk that remove quirks, stores them, and gives them to other  people, well, I'm sure it's just serendipity that the grandson of the  woman who taught All  Might how to be a hero, a boy who was born with an  extra toe joint that  meant he was almost certainly quirkless, just so  happened to develop an anomalous quirk that meant he could never fully  embrace someone.”

 

Izuku shivered under my gaze as the truth of what happened set in.

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Очень хороший кусок про все для одного из фанфика английского - разговор попаданца Шигараки и Оллмайта

I shook my head. “Okay, so I'm going to explain this in a roundabout  way. Hopefully it'll distract you and make the whole thing not hit you  as hard.”
 
As if.
 
But I suppose I could try.
 
Even as All Might looked ready to object again, I waved him off. “Your  friend, David Shield.” His mouth snapped shut while Izuku snapped to  attention, the boy's eyes seeming to shine with interest. “He's under  the impression that your impending retirement from heroism will  destabilize society at large.” From what I knew, he was right, too.
 
All Might grimaced and sighted, shaking his head, “Oh, Dave...”
 
“To prevent you from needing to retire,” I continued, sipping at my  drink, “he's invented a nifty little gadget that amplifies the user's  quirk.” Both of their eyes widened in shock. “Except, the I-island board  of directors made the decision that this kind of technological  development would potentially destabilize various geopolitical hotspots  if it ever proliferated into wider use.”
 
All Might slowly nodded. “I can see why they would. Dave really is a  genius, but he's always been a bit of an idealist, too. For him,  technology is only ever used for the good of humanity.”
 
I stared at the man and decided that, no, I didn't really have enough time to dig into that.
 
“So he's decided that, for the good of the world, he needs to steal it and smuggle it out to you. He's already in contact with a group of  professional high-end thieves that are going to assault I-island and  help him recover his own invention from where it's been locked up.”
 
All Might's jaw dropped as he stood and began pacing. “Dammit Dave! No,  you can't... ugh. I'll have to do something about this.” Yagi turned  back to me, “thank you for bringing this to my attention, I'll-” he took  in my grim expression and his fists clenched, “there's more to this,  isn't there?”
 
I shrugged. “So, here's the billion-yen question. One of the very few  people All Might considers friends is planning to break bad and destroy  his life by masterminding the heist of the century. I want you to think really hard about what I'm going to ask next.” I dipped my glasses to look him in  the eye again. “Who, in the criminal underworld, would hear about this  and realize that forcing you to arrest your best friend and throw him in  jail would be the absolute most amusing thing ever?”
 
Confusion and incomprehension clouded his expression for a long moment, before...
 
If I'd thought that All Might had frozen before, I would have said my  new question almost turned the man to a pale, haggard statue. Very  quietly, a raspy whisper left his mouth, the one word encapsulating the  desperate denial of a man wanting to reject the truth he knew to be  real.
 
“No.”
 
I leaned back against the rusting shell of a washing machine and  sighed. Yeah, there it was. The existential dread that I'd been hoping  to engender as some kind of vicarious revenge for what I remembered of  Shigaraki's youth and the revelations I'd brought with me. Actually  achieving what I'd set out to do, though, felt hollow. I just couldn't  enjoy it.
 
“It gets worse,” I stated, because of course it did. All for One knew  nothing if not how to twist the knife. “Because the real mastermind of  this entire plan doesn't actually care if your friend survives to  give you his invention.” All Might grimaced, practically trembling with  rage. “In fact, maybe the thieves he hires make sure he suffers an  'accident' just so he dies in front of you.” I narrowed my gaze. “Just  so his daughter sees you unable to save him, unable to stop him from destroying his life trying to help you.”
 
“I'm going to tear him apart-” All Might began, his skeletal arms nearly bulging with an involuntary activation of his quirk.
 
“Because then you've got a young, socially isolated, quirkless girl  who's father just died or was imprisoned at the hands of her greatest  hero. The man she considers family as well. And someone offers her a way  to take control of her life back, something to let her strike  back at the system that punished her father for wanting to do the right  thing and help the world's greatest hero. Because people like that,  well.... those have to be the real villains, right?”
 
Yagi looked on the verge of throwing up, and if he'd had anything in his stomach I'm sure he would have. Really, if the man had a stomach in the first place, I'm sure he'd have given it the old college try.
 
“Because,” I continued, propping my feet up on something that might have once been part of a car, “he already did it once and it worked out pretty well that time. Why not try it again?”
 
There was real horror in his eyes now, as he looked at me. It  was a dark and visceral, gut-churning thing that threatened to eat alive  a man who believed in a good, kind, and just world. Spitting that kind  of poison out... I wouldn't be surprised if it really did kill just a  little bit of hope and faith in humanity.
 
“Ah... Shi-shimura-san? Who... who did all this?” Izuku asked into the  lingering silence. He was shaken by what he'd heard, smart enough as he  was to put together a few missing pieces in the story, but he was  also... yeah, there was steel in him. I knew that. I didn't know why I was surprised, but... maybe it was just that he was so perpetually-easy to underestimate.
 
“He told me to call him 'sensei' when we met.” I replied. “The name he  goes by is All for One. I'll let All Might tell you all of the gritty  details later, but suffice to say he's the guy who put a hole in your  mentor's side.”
 
Izuku's eyes widened at the revelation, but he nodded slowly and,  looking between All Might and myself, he asked. “And... your grandmother  was someone important to All Might so he kidnapped you when you were  young? So that he could use you against All Might later?”
 
I chuckled and shook my head. “Kid, you don't get it yet. He doesn't need to kidnap people. That's amateur-hour stuff for him.” I waved at my footrest. “But where are my manners? Kick back, put your feet up.”
 
Izuku blushed, “A-ah, that's okay. I mean, I'm, um...”
 
I sighed. “Put your feet up, Green Bean, I'm trying to make a point.”
 
The teenager frowned, but after a look at the still-comatose All Might,  he slowly stretched his legs out and rested his feet on the same piece  of debris I was using.
 
I grinned and snapped my fingers, pointing at our now-mutual footrest.  “Now that I think about it, those are some sweet-looking shoes. It's  kind of weird that we have the same taste in shoes.” I wiggled my feet  and showed off the bulky red-and-white sneakers they were encased in,  identical to Izuku's own. “Why do you think that is, Izuku-kun?”
 
The greenette frowned as he looked at our footwear, realizing what I'd  pointed out was true. “I, um... I don't know? It is weird, though,  because-I just mean, I wear these because they're comfortable because-”  His eyes widened. “The extra toe-joint! You're quirkless too!”
 
He slapped a hand over his mouth as he realized the unconscionable  taboo he'd committed. To be fair, in any other circumstance, being  'outed' as quirkless publicly would have been the kind of thing someone  would get truly angry over, so I couldn't blame him.
 
I casually reached over and picked up a broken children's toy and held  it up before making final contact with my pinkie finger and allowing it  to disintegrate into dust.
 
Izuku's eyes widened again, this time in a mix of confusion and some  nebulous hurt for being 'tricked' into a wrong conclusion. I returned  his expression with a cold, cruel smirk.
 
“Five-point disintegration quirk,” I stated. “See, it's weird because I was a late-bloomer. Quirk didn't emerge until I was seven or so and, well...” I picked up another piece of junk. “It just so happened to be a quirk that was both completely anomalous and would seriously injure, or even kill anyone who came in contact with me. Like my family.”
 
Izuku inhaled a shocked breath and I saw Yagi close his eyes, a stricken expression on his face as he listened.
 
“Because that's what All for One does,” I explained. “Coincidences, random accidents, and tragedies that all just happen to further his designs. With a quirk that remove quirks, stores them, and gives them to other people, well, I'm sure it's just serendipity that the grandson of the woman who taught All  Might how to be a hero, a boy who was born with an extra toe joint that  meant he was almost certainly quirkless, just so happened to develop an anomalous quirk that meant he could never fully embrace someone.”
 
Izuku shivered under my gaze as the truth of what happened set in.

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Почему у меня такое ощущение будто я читаю мемуары молодого Короля Душ из Блича до того как Бездну разделили на Общество Душ, Хоэко Мундо и Ад, только на европейский манер?

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Широкий жест от Ярвиса и типо решение проблемы с заменой крестьян на воров который в реале нифига не сработает ибо эти гаврики только пальцы веером делать могут но когда дойдет до работы то загубят весь урожай нафиг за пару дней со всей распальцованной уверенностью что работы здесь на пять минут и вообще.

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Староверов можно на службе ставить в строй бригады, РЭБ, картографов, архивистов, ведущих документооборот, снабженцев, начальников складов, радистов, водителей призывников и т.д. , то есть тех кому и не нужна именно военная подготовка с насилием

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Еще тогда вопрос если можно: если ГГ вырастит вместо ног длиннющие пушки то сможет ли он ими ходить по местному морю-океану. или использовать от них отдачу чтобы передвигатся в воздухе (чтото типа взравного джетпака)


И еще помнится в скайпеи был материал который парил сам по себе, если из него сделать броню сможет ли ГГ скопировать и материал чтобы парить и потом летать на отдаче от пушек?

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Вопрос на счет фрукта - что из перечисленного является оружием для фрукта? 

1.Химическое оружие

2.Линкор

3.3 супер оружия из потерянного века (корабль, пушка, ещё что-то) 

4.Воля Вооружения

5.Бомбы

6.Пацифиста (как киборг и все его оружие) 

7.Часть приёмов рокуши (шиган, слэш с ноги,  7ой приём) 

8.Оружие и броня из кайросеки и соответственно материал

9.Различные супер атаки других фруктов

10.Каратэ рыболюдей

11.Шичика и его стиль и тело из Катанагатари

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Потому что все и так понятно, а юродство директора слушать вот вообще не интересно. Первые разы умиляет как когда он в первых книгах 2 миллиона на глазах у всех получил, потом как конвеер на нейтрали пошло, а сейчас уже просто бесит когда ты уже сотого придурка слушаешь об одном и том же и хочется побыстрее перейти к конкретике. Серьезно у людей терпение не бесконечное и у Сережи тоже.

Я уже молчу о том как Хрущев при нем проводил допросы и как он же выбесился при последнем разговоре с ГГ в самолете, тоже уже Хруща под конец все эти директора-крысы и всякие уголовники бесили несказанно.

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