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Oh I'm so glad it worked!! I just edited the first chapter and added the translation. Hope you approve of it as well!
And I'm sorry for not using the right pronoun for you. Indeed it wasn't clear in English but thank you so much for explaining 
Oh my god I knew I would mess up with the diminutive names I'm very sorry.
This would be great! I truly appreciate your kind help 
I shall edit the first chapter to add the Russian translation today. I will be waiting for your notes
Thank you very much for your kind words and advice! I'm so glad that you liked the first chapter, and I hope you would like the next ones.
I did consider using an automatic translator, but I thought it would still make mistakes and give incorrect translations that could make the text lose its essence.
I'm very sorry for the thumbs down, but I totally understand them. Would you advise me to keep posting the chapters in English or use an automatic translator at the risk of having translation mistakes?
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Спасибо! Очень рада, что вам интересно. Продолжение скоро.